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It's pretty unclear how to get enough food to sustain your population, you basically have to completely survive on raids.

This has a ton of potential, it's a hell of a lot more than I was expecting for a v0.02. Keep it up! I'll definitely keep an eye on this on itch.io.

Feedback and stuff:
- It kind of feels like you hit a wall when you jump, if that makes sense? It's a weirdly abrupt stop at the apex of the jump.
- The autosave thing doesn't work, I died before hitting a checkpoint and respawned in the previous level.
- The boss was a bit weird, it's just a giant enemy with lots of health, but it's understandable due to how early the game is in development. Also his animation was sometimes glitching when I hit him and I could see him in the first frames of the walking animation interspersed with the being hit animation.
- Feels very polished for the state that it's in. Yeah, there's janky stuff here and there, but the ideas and everything seem very fleshed out and it's easy to see how this could be really good.
- Why does falling into a pit deal 10 damage but spikes deal 40?
- Pixel art and animations are very nice
- Girls are hot
- You need much more text/writing in the smut parts, more description, detail, etc.

TenPennyfingers responds:

This is phenomenal feedback! Thank you so much!

Actually, this is my first project where I've had feedback that said "you didn't describe something ENOUGH" and frankly I'm flattered :D

Do you have to open the chest to get to the second place to plant a rock bomb? I used all my keys so I can't open it. Otherwise, where do you plant the second rock bomb?

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It's really boring. The melody doesn't really change much throughout the song. After 39 seconds in, the song really stays the same. I get that part of it is due to the style of the song, but you do have to add some different things. The main riff is uncreative and just sounds bad. I would advise you to try something new. Also, if you're trying to write for guitar, I would recommend listening to instrumental guitar music or something, it might give you some ideas. (If you want, I can give you some advice on writing stuff for guitar, as I'm a guitarist.) I listened to some of your other audio, and, although there's room for improvement, it's decent. We all write songs which aren't so good, don't sweat about it.

Hi! I'm just a guy who plays games here, and wants to try to write some music.

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