TotallyNotACannibal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[dreamy guitar thing]

It's really boring. The melody doesn't really change much throughout the song. After 39 seconds in, the song really stays the same. I get that part of it is due to the style of the song, but you do have to add some different things. The main riff is uncreative and just sounds bad. I would advise you to try something new. Also, if you're trying to write for guitar, I would recommend listening to instrumental guitar music or something, it might give you some ideas. (If you want, I can give you some advice on writing stuff for guitar, as I'm a guitarist.) I listened to some of your other audio, and, although there's room for improvement, it's decent. We all write songs which aren't so good, don't sweat about it.